Five main elements of my novel are: imediacy, plausible, foreshadowing, mood, view.
The five elements from most important to least:
Imediacy,
Mood,
Foreshadowing,
View,
Plausible.
I feel that imediacy has been used really well in the novel I've been reading. Anne uses quite impressive words and desriptions for someone of her age. Also because it's her diary, and says everything she feels and thinks, it makes me feel like I'm there even more.
"i shall perservere, in spite of everything, and find my own way through it all, and swallow my tears. I only wish i could see the results already or ocasionally recieve encouragement from someone who loves me. Dont condemn me; remember rather that sometimes i too can reach the bursting point" (Anne Frank, The Diary Of A Young Girl)
This sounds like a great book. you got your point across very good and you described what you liked very well.
ReplyDeleteI agree that diaries make you feel like you're there with the person who wrote it. Watch out for grammar mistakes before you publish! :)
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like a really good book. I like how you said her diary makes you feel like you're there yourself! This post makes me want to check this book out!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the five main elements you choose for the book, the Diary of Anne Frank. Check for some grammar mistakes before you post though!
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